Comma Splice: What It Is and How to Fix It (with Examples)
Summary
What Is a Comma Splice?
A comma splice happens when you use a comma to connect two sentences that could stand on their own. A comma is not strong enough to join these two thoughts, and it becomes a run-on sentence.
An example of a comma splice (wrong way):
❌ I finished my homework, I went out to meet my friends.
Both parts could be sentences by themselves, and it’s wrong to join them with a comma.
Comma splices often show up in academic essays, emails, and blogs. This is because people want to make their writing flow better, but it leads to confusion and the sentences lose their strength. Knowing how to fix comma splices will help you write clearer, more professional sentences.
Why It Matters
Comma splices might seem like a small mistake, but they can affect your writing in big ways.
1. They lead to weird, rushed, or confusing sentences.
Readers expect a clear break between complete ideas. When you use a comma, the sentence feels rushed or confusing.
2. They make your academic or professional writing look bad.
If you’re writing something formal like an essay, research paper, or report, your teacher or reader might notice the comma splice, and it sounds like you don’t know how to structure sentences.
3. They sound choppy and break the logical flow.
Punctuation tells the reader how your writing should sound. A comma splice puts an odd pause in a place where it doesn’t belong.
By learning how to spot and fix comma splices, you improve the way your writing sounds to the reader, your tone, and the clarity of your writing.
When To Use a Comma (And When Not To)
A comma splice is when you use a comma in a place where you should use something else. Here are 4–6 situations where writers often use a comma incorrectly, with examples:
1. Joining Two Independent Clauses
The wrong way:
❌ The meeting ended early, everyone left the office.
The right way:
✔ The meeting ended early. Everyone left the office. (period)
✔ The meeting ended early; everyone left the office. (semicolon)
✔ The meeting ended early, and everyone left the office. (coordinating conjunction)
2. When One Thing Causes the Other to Happen
Writers often use a comma to join these two sentences, but it’s a comma splice.
The wrong way:
❌ It started raining, we canceled the trip.
The right way:
✔ It started raining, so we canceled the trip.
✔ It started raining; we canceled the trip.
3. When the Two Things Are Contrasting
The wrong way:
❌ I wanted to go jogging, it was too cold outside.
The right way:
✔ I wanted to go jogging, but it was too cold outside.
✔ I wanted to go jogging; however, it was too cold outside.
4. When One Thing Happens As a Result of the Other
The wrong way:
❌ She clicked the link, the page wouldn’t load.
The right way:
✔ She clicked the link, but the page wouldn’t load.
✔ She clicked the link; the page wouldn’t load.
5. When the Two Things Combine to Describe the Subject
The wrong way:
❌ He finished the project, he submitted it immediately.
The right way:
✔ He finished the project and submitted it immediately.
✔ He finished the project. He submitted it immediately.
6. When the Second Clause Describes or Explains Something About the First
The wrong way:
❌ The data looks wrong, you should double-check it.
The right way:
✔ The data looks wrong; you should double-check it.
✔ The data looks wrong, so you should double-check it.
Comma Splice Examples (Right vs. Wrong)
Here are some more examples of comma splices so you can spot them easily.
The wrong way (comma splice) | The right way |
|---|---|
The sun set, it got dark quickly. | The sun set. It got dark quickly. / The sun set, and it got dark quickly. |
I love coffee, I drink it every morning. | I love coffee, and I drink it every morning. |
You didn’t reply, I assumed you were busy. | You didn’t reply, so I assumed you were busy. |
The test was difficult, many students failed. | The test was difficult; many students failed. |
She studied hard, she still didn’t pass. | She studied hard, but she still didn’t pass. |
Comma Splice vs. Similar Concepts
Concept | Definition | Example | Should You Fix it? |
|---|---|---|---|
Comma Splice | Two independent clauses joined only by a comma | I was tired, I went home. | Yes — always fix |
Run-On Sentence | Two independent clauses joined with no punctuation | I was tired I went home. | Yes — incorrect |
Fused Sentence | Same as run-on; no pause between clauses | We left early it was raining. | Yes — incorrect |
Compound Sentence | Two independent clauses joined correctly (conjunction/semicolon) | I was tired, so I went home. | Correct |
How To Type/Use the Proper Sentence Connectors
Using the right punctuation is all you need to avoid comma splices. Here’s how to find the most common punctuation and symbols on your device.
Windows
Period: . (the standard key that comes after “>”)
Semicolon: shift + ;
Em dash (use if you’re looking for a more stylish sentence): alt+0151
HTML period: .
HTML semicolon: ;
Mac
Semicolon & period: on keyboard
Em dash: shift+option+ -
HTML: same as Windows
Google Docs
Use punctuation on your keyboard
Insert → Special Characters → type “dash” into the field for other punctuation symbols
Autocorrect may also turn double hyphens -- into an em dash
HTML
Period: .
Semicolon: ;
Non-breaking space: (can be useful for formatting!)
Mobile (iOS/Android)
Long-press on period key for other punctuation marks
Semicolon is on alternate keyboard
Em dash is under long-press hyphen -
Common Mistakes & Writing Tips
1. Using a comma because you want the “sound” to be connected and not broken up by a period or semicolon
Even if the two things feel connected, you still need to use the right way to join independent clauses.
2. Using too many semicolons
This is better than a comma, but you shouldn’t use it to fix every situation. Try to mix up your structure with periods, conjunctions, transitions, etc.
3. Forgetting about coordinating conjunctions (FANBOYS)
You can use: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Example:
✔ I was hungry, so I made a sandwich.
4. Fixing the sentence for flow instead of structure
Good writing has both a nice flow and correct grammar.
5. Fixing a comma splice with a different grammar mistake
For example, some people throw in “however” after a comma, but that still sounds wrong in a normal sentence.
Conclusion
A comma splice is when you connect two complete sentences using only a comma. This is a very common grammar mistake, but it weakens your clarity, tone, and logic. Luckily, it’s really easy to fix. You can fix a comma splice with:
● a period
● a semicolon
● a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS)
● subordination (because, although, since)
If you can remember to use these different structures, your writing will be clearer, more professional, and more engaging—whether you’re writing academic essays, workplace emails, or long-form content.
